Friday, July 30, 2021
Ever Tried Writing for Children?
Tuesday, November 24, 2020
Writing for Kids and A Feast for Oscar
Yesterday's post covered writing for children. There is such a wide variety of avenues to travel when writing for children. Consider that the age range is from 0-18.
If you want to write books for children, take it slowly and work on stories for children's magazines or publications like the Weekly Reader that schools used up until 2012. The Scholastic News is still going and is weekly. Build up your resume with short story publications. When you do start submitting a book to publishing houses, you can show that you have been successful in writing for children by listing those short pieces.
Besides building a resume, you will learn a great deal from writing those shorter pieces. Doing the short ones will help ease your way into writing a full book. I've advised writers of memoir to try short memoir pieces before tackling a book-length memoir.
Once again, use a search engine to find publications that will fit the age group you are writing for. The children's magazines are geared to age groups. I recently sold a story to Cadet Quest which is a Christian magazine for boys 9-14. Read the guidelines carefully to make sure it's a good fit for what you have written. Many of the children's magazines and ezines are geared to boys or girls, while others include both genders.
Pay attention to the trends in children's publishing. There was a time when mood picture books were very popular, then they phased out. Publishers tend to follow the trends, so you may want to keep that in mind.
Since Thanksgiving is only two days away, I'm going to close today with my Thanksgiving story for kids that was published a few years ago in a magazine. The idea came from an experience I had at about age 10. When you read the story, you'll see the reason for the cereal box shown with today's post.
A Feast For Oscar
“Turkey!” shouted three boys in the back row of Miss Edwards’ fourth-grade class.
“What else?” our teacher asked.
Melissa Martin waved her hand. “How abour sweet potatoes and cranberries?”
We were listing foods people usually eat for Thanksgiving. Thinking of all those good things made my mouth water and my stomach growl like a hungry lion. I raised my hand and waved it back and forth so Miss Edwards would call on me.
“Yes Tim,” she said.
I added my Thanksgiving favorite. “How about stuffing for the turkey?”
Nearly everyone in our class named something—everyone except for Oscar Livingood.
Miss Edwards strolled between the rows of desks. “Oscar, what will you have for this special dinner?” she asked.
Oscar ducked his head and mumbled words that sounded like, Cereal, I guess.”
The class roared with laughter. I laughed long and hard at what Oscar had said. Oscar was a real comic.
Miss Edwards held up her hand for quiet, then asked Oscar, “Are you sure?”
Oscar kept his eyes on the desktop. “Pretty sure. That’s what we have most nights.”
Miss Edwards patted Oscar on the head and returned to the front of the room.
We waited. What would she say now?
“Take out your English books and turn to page 67.”
That was it. She never mentioned Oscar’s strange remark. Instead, she erased the long list of foods on the chalkboard and the subject of Thanksgiving dinner was dropped.
I walked home from school alone that day. I couldn’t stop thinking about Oscar. The guy had a funny name and it sounded life he ate funny, too. Maybe he wasn’t trying to amuse us, maybe he was serious.
I ran into the house letting the screen door slam behind me. I cringed and waited for Mom to yell “Don’t slam that door!” but she didn’t say a word. She was at the kitchen table writing.
I grabbed an apple from the bowl on the counter and peered over her shoulder. “Hey Mom, what are you doing?”
She smiled but kept on writing. “I’m making a grocery list for Thanksgiving. There are so many extra things to buy when you create a super-duper, fantastic feast like we’ll have next week. Your Gran is coming and so is Uncle Pete.”
I said, “Get lots of good stuff. I’m saving up to eat enough for two people.” Mom’s list included all my favorites—turkey, cranberries, pumpkin, potatoes and sweet potatoes. On and on it went. “Yum, I can’t wait for Thanksgiving.”
“We have a lot to be thankful for.” Mom said. “Not everyone can afford to buy all these extrea things for a holiday dinner.”
Her comment made me think of Oscar, and I didn’t like the picture forming in my mind. Would Oscar and his mom sit at their table with nothing but two bowls of cereal? I shook my head a little to clear the picture away and went upstairs to start on my homework.
The next day I watched Oscar Livingood. He needed a haircut, and his clothes looked pretty worn and raggedy. Most days, Oscar faded into the background because he didn’t have much to say. Maybe that’s why I never paid much attention to him before. Now, all I could think of was the bowl of cereal he’d eat for Thanksgiving dinner.
On Monday morning, Miss Edwards announced that the class would make up a basket of food for a needy family for a class project. By the day before Thanksgiving, cans and boxes rested in the basket our teacher had provided. Even Oscar slipped a can of soup in with the rest. Miss Edwards would add a turkey at the last minute.
We held a drawing to determine who would go with the teacher to deliver the basket. I drew one of the lucky tickets, and so did Oscar. After school, we climbed into Miss Edwards’ van. She stopped at the market to pick up the turkey and we were off to visit the family whose name had been given to us. They knew we were coming, but even so, their faces lit up with happiness when they opened the door. The mother and father thanked us over and over, and three little kids fingered the overflowing basket.
On the way home, I said to Oscar, “It’s good to help people who really need help, isn’t it?
Oscar grinned and pushed his long hair off his forehead. “They’ll remember this Thanksgiving for a long time. They’ll know somebody cared.”
Suddenly, the bowl of cereal popped into my head again. “Oscar, who are you going to be with tomorrow?”
“Just my mom.”
That night I tossed and turned in my bed while I dreamed about giant boxes of cereal marching in a parade. When I woke up, I knew what my plan for the day would be. First, I’d talk to Mom and Dad and tell them about Oscar and his mother. Next, I would walk down to Oscar’s house and invite them to join us at our dinner table. I wanted him to know somebody cared about him, too. Oscar was not going to eat cereal on Thanksgiving Day.
(C)
Thursday, March 5, 2020
Writing For Children and A Dragon Story
Wilhemina Higgins’ long braids bounced as she ran down the narrow tunnel the bookshelves made in the Westlake Public Library. Her untied shoelaces slapped against well-worn sneakers. Past the Js, Ks, and Ls she flew, only slowing slightly as she rounded the corner.
Wilhemina spied a dragon waiting at the end of the row of shelves. She screeched to a sudden stop. Her heart thumped.
At first, it was silent. Then the monster snorted, lifted its huge head, took in a gigantic breath inward and fell silent again.
Wilhemina swallowed and took one step back. Before she could turn and retrace her path, the enormous dragon reared back on its hind legs, threw back its massive head, and breathed out a whoosh! Smoke curled from its nostrils while flames burst forth from the great mouth. The dragon clawed the air and flapped magnificent wings. The green and purple scales that covered the beast from head to toe gleamed under the library lights. Its amber eyes glinted like cut crystal.
“Wilhemina Higgins!” The dragon roared. “How many times have you been told? There is no running in the library.”
“Do you mean today, Miss Philpot?” Wilhemina looked right into the dragon’s eyes. “Or did you mean all week?”
“You know the rules,” the librarian said. “Why do you come here, if not to read?” Miss Philpot breathed heavily, and she opened and closed her claws.
Wilhemina feared the dragon might snort and spurt fire again at any minute.
“My mother doesn’t get home from work until 5 o’clock.” Wilhemina’s voice was as firm as Miss Philpot’s. “She says a library is a safe place for me to stay after school.”
The dragon pulled her sweater close around her shoulders. “If you cannot follow the rules, you must go outside.”
“It’s cold as a bowl of ice cream out there, and it’s going to rain, too,” Wilhemina answered.
“Then go sit on the steps.”
“The steps are hard as rocks.”
“You could stay at school,” Miss Philpot answered, barely moving her lips as she spoke.
“There’s no one there,” Wilhemina answered back, in the same way, lips scarcely moving.
“Then you must study while you’re here.” Miss Philpot’s eyes flashed, and her hands turned claw-like once more.
“I’ve studied all day,” Wilhemina told her. She folded her arms and spread her feet apart, ready for battle.
The dragon hissed and narrowed its eyes. “Don’t be insolent.”
“I don’t know what that means,” Wilhemina said.
“Then go look it up!” Miss Philpot cried as she rushed to her desk.
Wilhemina felt a tug on her shirttail and turned around. “What do you want?”
Eyes wide, the tugger looked up at Wilhemina. “Is she mad at you?”
Wilhemina sighed. “Every day. So, what’s your problem, Lucy Ann?”
“I’m bored.”
“Then go read a book.” Wilhemina thought her answer sounded a great deal like Miss Philpot.
“Can’t read yet,” Lucy Ann replied. She pushed her bottom lip over the top one and stared at Wilhemina.
“Oh go away and leave me alone,” Wilhemina said. She sprinted along the line of shelves ignoring the brightly colored book jackets. She stopped at the tall library windows where rain beat against the panes and thunder rattled them. She put her elbows on the windowsill, curled her hands around her cheeks, and watched the wind bend the tree branches outside.
There was another tug on her shirt. Without looking around, she said, “What do you want now, Lucy Ann?”
“Read this to me.” Lucy Ann held up a large picture book.
Wilhemina shrugged and took the book Lucy Ann held out. “Why not?” She sighed.
They marched past the dragon’s desk. Miss Philpot watched silently, but Wilhemina thought she could see tiny wisps of smoke curling from under her nose.
The two girls sat at a round table, and Wilhemina read aloud in a quiet voice, wriggling on her chair as she turned the pages.
“You can do better than that, Wilhemina.” Lucy Ann scowled. “You sound dull.”
There was a moment of silence. Then Wilhemina said, “You’re right!” She sat up straighter, flipped back to page one, and read with more feeling. She used a different voice for each character in the story. Halfway through, she noticed three more listeners around the table.
“Keep going,” one of them said when she stopped reading.
Wilhemina laughed and continued reading the story and showing the pictures to the younger children.
From the corner of her eye, she spied a fluffy, long-haired cat dancing about on dainty paws. Its amber eyes surveyed the group at the table. Then, the cat purred deep in its throat.
When Wilhemina closed the book, the cat purred again and said, “Wilhemina Higgins, you read that book wonderfully well. Perhaps you could start an after-school story club. What do you think?”
“I think I would like that very much, Miss Philpot.” Wilhemina reached out to shake the paw the librarian offered her.
Friday, July 19, 2019
Writing for Children and an Interview
Thursday, December 10, 2015
A Little List For Writers of Children's Stories
Ask yourself Did I...
- preach too much?
- I talk down to kids?
- let an adult solve the problem in the story?
- let the child in the story figure it out?
- use tension to keep interest?
- use sensory details?
- make use of some humor?
- have a good opening hook?
- create a satisfying ending?
- use the proper vocabulary for the age group I aimed for?
- like the story when I finished it?
Monday, September 5, 2011
There's A Dragon In The Library
Just a short post on this holiday. A children's story I wrote some time ago has been publsihed at Knowonder! ezine. I wrote about the assistant editor contacting me last week about the story, which I'd submitted to them over two years ago. The ezine/magazine--they had both an online and print edition--had gone out of business. Then, additional funding made it possible for them to get going again. The online ezine offers children a story per day.
Readers are invited to vote for the one they like best each month. The story receiving the most votes gets $100.It's the only monetary compensation. As much as I think all writing should be compensated, I make an exception for children's ezines like this one that encourages reading.
A comment left at the end of the story counts as a vote. So, if anyone would like to read "There's A Dragon In The LIbrary" at Knowonder! and leave a comment, I'd be most appreciative.
If you write children's stories, check out the submission process at www.knowonder.com and send your best story in. With a story per day, they are looking for stories. It's a great opportunity for those who write for kids.
Wednesday, October 21, 2009
Kid Lit
I enrolled in a correspondence course that promised to teach me to write for children, and it did exactly that. I benefited from the one on one correspondence between me and my instructor. She encouraged me to submit my work to children's magazines, and so began my writing career.
I enjoyed writing those children's stories, but as time went on, I ventured into other types of writing. Nevertheless, I still like to write a children's story now and then. They're not easy to do. You must say a whole lot in very few words.
That means tight writing. No unnecessary words. Every single one must count. Like adult fiction, children's stories need a beginning, a middle, and an end. The protagonist has a problem and must solve it on his or her own. No adults giving them the way out. And they need to do it in a matter of a few hundred words.
Highlights For Children is one of the best-known magazines for kids. They cover a wide age range and offer stories for the primary child and the ones in the intermediate grades. But their top word count for the older kids is only 800 words. A children's writer learns to whittle away at a story until it reaches the maximum word count without losing the story line along the way.
Stories for kids often teach a lesson, but it needs to be subtle. Kids don't like to be preached to. Can't blame them, we don't like it either.
One of the most difficult things a writer for kids must do is to keep up with what kids like today. They aren't going to want to read the kind of stories we had in our childhood. I doubt if The BobbseyTwins wouldn make it in today's world. Even popular stories like Nancy Drew mysteries can survive only if updated so that today's kids can relate.
There are many facets to writing kid lit, and I've only listed a few in this posting. Anyone seriously considering writing for children needs to research that genre thoroughly. Contrary to what some think, writing for kids is a tough job.
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