Google Your Writing Name

 

A fellow writer mentioned googling his name on a Facebook post today, and it made me think of times I have done the same with some interesting results.

What about you? Have you ever googled your name? Your writing name? Many writers use a variation of their given name to use as the one they use on their writing. I added my maiden name because I discovered there was a mystery writer by the name of Nancy Kopp. I definitely do not write mysteries and would not want to be confused with her, nor would she like to be mixed-up with me, I'm sure.

Back to googling your writing name. This is a great exercise. It can do a few things for you.

A. It can boost your ego a bit when you see what of your published works pop up. Not everything will, of course, but a good many. Most likely, the things that pop up will be of recent times, not something you published ten years ago.

B. It will allow you to learn if any of your writing has been used by others without your permission. I've had that experience a few times. People like something you've written and want to put it on their website or blog, so they snatch it, along with your name as writer, but they neglect to contact you and ask permission. To me, that is akin to slipping in your bedroom window and whisking away something you've written in the dark of night. 

When I discovered my work on other websites or blogs, I've contacted the owner and expressed my dismay in a nice way, not threatening or mean. One man accused me of taking his earnings away and a great deal more. His thought was to turn the tables and make me the bad guy. 

If this happens to you, there are a couple ways to handle the situation. You can thank the person for using your work and attributing it to you but also suggest that the next time, they ask permission. Or, if they get nasty, ask them to take it down immediately. 

And certainly, if they use your work without giving your name as author, then you have every right to be angry and let them know. And ask to have it removed. Lawsuit? Probably not gonna be of much help in a single situation like this. 

 C. It's also very interesting to see where your work is being highlighted. I used Google in the title of this post, but try two or three different search engines to enter your writing name.

As your writing exercise for today, put your writing name in a few search engines and see what comes up. You might be surprised. 

The A to Z Memoir Exercise for Writers

Our quote today is from Dr. Seuss, that wise man who wrote wonderful books for children that contained advice for adults, as well. On our poster, he said:  Sometimes you will never know the value of a moment until it becomes a memory. 

That makes me think of memoir writing. In memoirs, whether short pieces or an entire book, we revisit our memories and often find the meaning or value in them, and something we may have learned. Memoir writing is a big topic in today's world from both professional writers and those who are in the early days of writing. 

We write memoir to see how an experience affected us, how it made us feel, and what we learned. What we learned about ourselves and others. A memoir is not an autobiography where we tell others about our entire lifetime. A memoir is about one part of our life, something that occurred that may have changed our lives in some way or changed the lives of friends or family. It might be an experience that taught us something about ourselves or about the world we live in.

Finding the right topic to write even a short memoir piece of maybe 1000 words is not always easy. I found an exercise recently that might help you discover your topic. 

The A to Z Memoir Exercise:

Make a list of all the letters in the alphabet, leaving a few lines between each one. Then, beginning with A write a word, then a line, or a sentence, or even two to represent that letter in your childhood, your teen years, or early adult years. 

Don't dwell on it. Look at A and go with the first thing that pops into your mind. For instance, when I did the exercise, the first word that came to me was 'alley' I wrote next to the word that the alley behind our big apartment building was where my friends and I played as children. Then, I moved on to B. 

As you move through the letters your mind will carry you back to those earlier days, and you might be surprised what pops up. 

When you have completed your list, read through it. You'll probably find several possible memoir topics among those 26 letters. 

Writing exercises can open the door to a new story, essay, poem, or memoir piece. 

 

How to Cut Words From Your Writing

 

Slash! Cut! Snip! Ax! Clip!  All those words relate to our poster quote today. Stephen King's advice is always right on. We should heed his words since he has written so many successful novels and a wonderful reference book for writers titled "On Writing." 

I am in agreement with him about cutting the excess fat. Recently, I wrote a first draft of a story to submit to Chicken Soup for the Soul whose guidelines state no more than 1200 words. And they mean 1200 words. My draft was 1244, but I've done the cutting exercise so many times that I felt confident I could cut those 44 extra words, and maybe more. Doing so would most likely make my story stronger and more concise. 

Most writers don't like to cut words they have written. Every word we write is precious, but if your story can be made better by cutting, then go for it. It's not as difficult a task as some think. And, as I said earlier, the more often you do the slashing words exercise, the better you become. A master slasher! (The phrase 'as I said earlier' could be cut without losing meaning in the sentence. See how easy it can be!)

How do you cut words? Read through the entire draft first, then go back and look at it paragraph by paragraph. You might be surprised by the number of times you repeat a word that isn't necessary. Let's look at several ways you can cut words.

A. Word Repetition:  You might find a section like this:  Alice drove to the beach with tears streaming. She'd go to the beach to forget him. She loved the beach.  20 words. Rewrite it like this:  Tears streaming, Alice drove to her beloved beach to forget him. 11 words. 

B.  Idea Repetition: Some writers fear that readers will not 'get' a point they are making, so they repeat the same idea in the next paragraph. You don't need to do this. Say it once and be done. Readers are capable of 'getting it' the first time. Another possibility is the writer is not sure what to write next, so the easy way out is to repeat the same idea using different words. All it does is add to the word count.

C.  Unnecessary words: When we talk or write, we tend to toss in many unnecessary words. They are words that have no bearing on the meaning, words that, when cut, do nothing harmful to the sentence. Words like 'just, very, really, usually, that, rather, quite, and probably' can be eliminated without losing meaning in the sentence. Google 'unnecessary words in writing' to read more.

D.  Dump the word 'the' in some places: We tend to use 'the' in many places where it is not necessary. The following sentence can be shortened. We use the recipe books and the hand-written ones from our mothers. Rewrite as: We use recipe books and hand-written ones from our mothers. You've cut two words and left the meaning. When you edit, look for places where 'the' can be dropped.

E. Eliminate 'that' when possible: In this sentence, 'We know that Paul will be late and that he will laugh about it.' The word 'that' can be cut without losing any meaning. It would read: 'We know Paul will be late and he will laugh about it.' 

F.  Cut adverbs and adjectives:  These are modifiers and are not always needed. Some writers think if one adjective is good, use two or three. That's overkill. One is fine, and most adverbs can be cut, too. Adverbs lead you into the trap of telling rather than showing.

G.  Conjunctions:  You can eliminate the 'and, but, or' words when you are writing a lengthy sentence. Instead, cut the conjunction and create two separate sentences. Do it in many places, and the number of words cut adds up.

H.  Lengthy sentences: Some writers love long sentences. Not only can they be divided into two sentences but also lose some words. Read a very long sentence and note ways it can be trimmed.

If you can cut words without losing meaning, go ahead and ax them. The more you work on cutting words, the easier it becomes. You train your editing eye to look for places to cut. 

 

Last Minute Writers

Last minute writers often come in last! Ouch! 

I've been thinking about those who wait until close to a deadline to send in a contest entry. They are to be commended for entering, as many writers think about entering a writing contest and think and think until they miss the deadline. However...

Those who enter on the deadline day or close to it run the risk of sending a piece of writing that was done in a hurry. When that happens, there is little time for editing and revising. It ends up either being skipped or done in such a hurry that it hardly makes a dent in good writing. The editing and revision process takes time. Write a first draft, then let it sit untouched for a few days, or even longer. Go back and edit and then at least once again. 

Send in your first draft, and you're quite likely to miss placing or winning a prize, especially if you're competing against others who have taken time to create a truly finished piece of writing. 

Out poster today says: 'Nothing makes me more productive than the last minute.' There is some truth in that saying. We definitely must move fast if we wait until close to the deadline. But will it be of benefit to us? Probably not. 

Some writers are also procrastinators. It's habitual with them. By doing so, they aren't giving themselves a fair shake. Plan ahead and work on a piece of writing a little at a time, and it is probably going to be a better result. Plan ahead to get ahead.

When a high school English teacher grades an essay assignment, he/she can tell who spent time on the writing and who dashed it off the night before. It's usually quite clear. So can contest judges.

So, what should you do? Plan ahead. If you enter your state writing contest annually, you'll know the time when the entry dates begin and end. Don't wait. Decide what you might like to enter. Perhaps it is something you've already written, or maybe you'd like to write a new piece for a certain category. Get that first draft written or start editing and revising a piece you've already written way ahead of the deadline. 

If you are the habitual procrastinator, you can change. It might be difficult, but you can do it. Do it once, twice, and more, and you might make it a habit. 

Yes, last minute writers often come in last! 

 

Persistence Should Be A Writer's Keyword

The fairy in today's poster has some good advice for writers, most especially newbie writers. Even intermediate level writers and beyond should give this poster quote some serious thought.

The poster indicates that the sweet little fairy has had failures and doubts in her writing life, but she kept on writing despite those two big boulders on her writing path. What about us?

I've had plenty of failures and doubts during my writing journey, and I'm quite certain you all have, too. It's part of the writing world. If a writer never had either one, I'd be a bit suspicious. 

We generally have more rejections than acceptances. One statistic I heard long ago was that the average writer receives twelve rejections for every acceptance. Wouldn't that put you in a funk? It would if you let it get you down. Instead of sinking like a rowboat with a hole in the bottom, take a good look at those rejections. (after you've gotten over the first disappointment for a few days) Consider yourself fortunate if you received a note from the editor telling you why they were not accepting your submission. If he/she points out a problem, address it. Rework the piece and submit it to another publication. If you received no reason why your piece was not accepted, you'll have to do some soul searching on your own. Look for weak spots, or missing pieces, or confusing places. Then rework them.

What about the doubts writers have? Nearly every writer has to deal with doubt at one time or another. For some, it's a regular ritual. For others, it comes only occasionally. But it's a part of our writing world. A bit of advice that qualifies as a cliche is the children's story The Little Engine That Could. The little engine kept repeating "I think I can" over and over until he reached his goal. We can do that, too. 

Instead of tearing yourself down, do all you can to build yourself up. Have you ever placed in a contest? Been published in a coveted publication? Self-published a book? Remind yourself of your accomplishments in the writing world. 

One keyword we need as writers is 'persistence'. If you give up easily, your writing world will soon turn to dust. Once again, it's your choice.

 

Remembering D-Day and My Visit to the Normandy Beaches

Today is the 80th anniversary of D-Day, commemorating the Allied invasion of France on June 6th, 1944. It was the breakthrough needed, the beginning of the ending of WWII. The following was written in 2013, published in 2014. I repost it as a reminder of the horrific price we pay for wars. My visit to Normandy left a deep impression on me. I hope young people today still learn of this part of history in their classes. 

Remembering D-Day on the Normandy Beaches

By Nancy Julien Kopp

Today marks the 81st Anniversary of D-Day when Allied troops landed in Normandy. It was the beginning of the end of WWII. I think it is worth commemorating each year. The essay below features my visit to Normandy in 2013. 

Visiting the Normandy Beaches

My husband and I were nearing the end of a river cruise in France which brought us from Paris to Normandy, famed for its Norman cows and fine dairy products as well as being the place where the Allied Invasion began during WWII. Our river ship docked at the final port--Honfleur, a picture postcard kind of town. Now, we were close to the highlight of the two-week cruise that had begun in Paris. We’d spend a full day at the D-Day beaches of Normandy, something Ken and I had looked forward to since booking months earlier.

At breakfast in the ship’s dining room that next morning, we sensed an air of anticipation that had not been evident in our other sightseeing tours on this trip. We were not the only ones looking forward to this day when we would view the beaches where the landing took place on June 6, 1944. The ensuing battle resulted in the Allied Forces turning the tide of the long-fought war that threatened so many, not only in France but other countries as well.

Being mostly senior citizens, the people in our tour group knew the history of the battle well. One man had even been there with the British navy shortly after the initial invasion. Only 16, he lied about his age to join the navy and was among the first who arrived after the beaches were taken. This now-elderly gentleman had spoken about his experience one evening on the river ship. That morning, as the bus took us from ship to the beaches, I watched this man who sat silently while we rode through the Normandy countryside. What thoughts were going through his mind, what memories were returning one by one? I wanted to ask but out of respect for what must have been an emotional time for him, I kept my silence.   

We filed quietly off the bus on that cold, wet March morning. There was none of the usual chatter and good-natured teasing on this day. We were a solemn, respectful group as we were introduced to our local tour guide. Her scarf whipped wildly in the strong wind, and like us, she wore hat, gloves and a warm coat. The skies were gray which somehow seemed fitting for this place where the remnants of battle and death remained even these 69 years after the fact.

The pillboxes where the German artillery faced the beaches remain today. I slipped and slid down a muddy incline to see inside one where parts of the big guns remained. Looking out to the beaches, I was immediately struck by the incongruity of those in the pillboxes versus the men on the open beaches on that summer morning so long ago. An old cliché seemed most fitting. They were “sitting ducks.” I shivered with both the thought and the sharp wind that found its way through my warm jacket.

The Allied Forces came to liberate France from German occupation, to push the German forces back to their own country. The Canadians landed at Juno Beach, the British at Sword and Gold Beach. Our American troops came ashore at both Omaha and Utah Beach. Paratroopers landed first followed by amphibious landing craft manned by Navy and Coast Guard personnel. Thousands of men with one goal—take the beaches and move on.

Gnawing fear must have been in the belly of each man but they surged forward with many falling on the beach. More than a thousand died on Omaha Beach alone. Others continued to dodge the constant gunfire and scaled precarious cliffs to reach the German strongholds. 

As the tour guide talked, I thought of the men I knew who had fought in this war of so long ago—my uncle who had been an Air Force pilot, my best friend’s uncle who had endured the hardships of a prison camp, and my dad’s cousin whose plane blew to pieces before he could escape. I thought of my father-in-law who served in Paris after the liberation and came home safely thanks to the courage of the men who fought on D-Day, those who carried General Eisenhower’s order with them. “Full victory. Nothing else.” 

Our tour guide told us of a U.S. Army veteran who had been on another of her tours. On the morning of the invasion, he was in a landing craft that held 32 men. 31 of them were violently seasick. By the time they landed, they were covered in vomit with no choice but to rush the beach and dodge the artillery fire. That was only one of nearly 7,000 boats that hit the five beaches early that morning. I shivered yet again but didn’t know if it was because of the cold misty rain or the stories she related.

Our next stop was the Normandy American Cemetery and Memorial, located not far from the beaches. In gratitude, the government of France granted use of the land, in perpetuity, as a permanent burial ground. We walked through the immaculate grounds, viewing the choppy waters of the English Channel just beyond. Nearly 10,000 American soldiers are buried here, a Latin cross or a Star of David marking each grave.

We gathered in the light rain at the Memorial area which features a 22-foot statue called “The Spirit of American Youth Rising From the Waves.” A representative from the cemetery addressed our group before leading a short ceremony to honor those who had sacrificed so much in this place. Everyone faced the wildly waving American flag, hand on hearts. Cold raindrops mixed with the warm tears that fell as I listened to a recording of our national anthem followed by a volley of gunshots and finally the playing of “Taps.” The lump in my throat would allow me no words, nor were any needed. 

As the group dispersed, Ken and I walked to the edge of the cemetery close to the sea. The rain had finally ceased. We gazed at the gray sky and the gray water, empty now save for the ghosts of 69 years earlier. We have heard about the Normandy Beaches and D-Day for most of our lives. We’ve seen pictures, watched movies depicting that day. But being there and hearing the personal stories brought reality like nothing else. What struck me as we walked silently back through the cemetery was that we humans didn’t learn from the horrors of WWII. We’ve continued to send our young men and women to fight in multiple wars since. 

At home, we fly our American flag with pride every June 6th to honor those who fought and those who didn’t come home. After visiting Normandy, that day will take on even greater significance. Veterans of the D-Day battle dwindle year by year. Before long, there will be none left, so it will be up to the next generation and the next to keep the memory alive. It is my great hope that this year’s 70th Anniversary will spark some interest among all ages for this commemorated day.

Book Review: A Shakespeare Sonnet Shakeup

 Are you looking for something new and different to read? I can recommend just the book for you. It's poetry. Now don't turn your nose up. Poetry can be enlightening, interesting, and educational. 

Poet and award-winning author, Tom Mach, set himself a real test. Mach used the first 77 sonnets Shakespeare wrote (of 154) to challenge himself to rewrite each of the Bard's sonnets as if he'd lived in the 21st century. The title, A Shakespeare Sonnet Shakeup should give you a glimmer of Mach's sense of humor.

What, you might ask, is a sonnet?  According to Google: Originating in the 13th century, the sonnet is a form of a poem that has 14 lines, written in iambic pentameter (10 syllables per line with specific stress pattern) and adhering to a specific rhyme scheme. Shakespeare's sonnets are written with three quatrains (or stanzas) and a concluding couplet (2-line stanza). The rhyming scheme is ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.

You don't need to know all that to enjoy reading Shakespeare's sonnets. Or those that Tom Mach has written as a 21st century version.

Shakespeare's sonnets follow a few themes--love, having more children, and leaving a piece of yourself behind in particular.

By rewriting each of the seventy-seven sonnets, Mach attempted to keep the premise of the sonnet the Bard wrote but offering it in the language of today's world. 

The book is set up so that Shakespeare's numbered sonnets are on the lefthand-side pages with a lovely, framed border, and a sketch of Will himself in the bottom right corner of each. Mach's borderless, rewritten sonnet is on the righthand-side page allowing for easy comparison. 

Mach offers an Introduction page to explain what he hoped to accomplish with this book, and also a final page about the sonnets of Will Shakespeare. Finally, Mach offers his own Sonnet #155 to add to the 154 that the Bard wrote. 

If you've ever felt a bit perplexed when reading Shakespeare's poetry, Mach offers the reader some fine explanations via his own interpretation of these first 77 sonnets. 

Purchase the paperback at Amazon for $9.95 and free for KindleUnlimited members. 

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