Making a Point In Personal Essays

Sharpened to a point!

The most important quality in a personal essay is that it makes a point. It shows a universal truth or allows the reader to learn something about life and how we live it. 

Readers enjoy the anecdotes that are most likely the greater part of a personal essay. In fact, that section may take up the vast majority of the number of words you write. All of it is used to make that point that you want your reader to know. 

Should you write several paragraphs when bringing out your reason for writing the essay, or memoir? That is not necessary. Sometimes, one sentence will do it. There is no set number of words. In fact, I'd say you don't want to belabor the point.

Some who write personal essays write hundreds of words but never show the reader why he/she is writing those words. You want the reader to finish with a feeling of "Oh, wow!" or "Yes, of course!" or a smile and a nod of the head. 

Where, in the essay, should you reveal your reason for writing? Anywhere. I think the spot most choose is after relating the incident that illustrates your point. You could write many paragraphs, then toss in that all-important sentence or two. You can also use it for your ending paragraph. You're in charge. Put it where you think it fits best. 

Occasionally, the point or truth you're hoping to illustrate is only inferred. Right or wrong? It's alright but why make it so hidden? There's nothing wrong in just saying it.

When you read personal essays, use your writer's eye. Find that point or the universal truth in each one as you read. Ask yourself if you would have placed it in the same part of the essay, or would you have done something different. Reading the essays others write serves to help you write better ones of your own. 

Like those pencils pictured above, sharpen your point so it's clear for your reader. Don't overdo it. Say it once and no more.