Showing posts with label avoiding cliches in writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label avoiding cliches in writing. Show all posts

Thursday, November 19, 2020

Don't Use Cliches in Writing

 

Autumn Leaves


Do you depend on cliches when you write? Do you use them when having a conversation with family or friends? Most of us probably slip many cliches into our chatting with others. Writers, however, should avoid them like the plague. Ooops ...'like the plague' is a cliche. 

A cliche is a word or phrase that is commonly used and usually overused. Use them too often, and they lose their effectiveness. A story filled with cliches makes the writer look a bit lazy and also uncreative.

According to the Macmillan Dictionary Blog:  The word cliché comes from the French verb ‘clicher’ meaning ‘to stereotype’.

Here's a partial list of widely used cliches:

  • shaking like a leaf
  • dead as a doornail
  • avoid it like the plague
  • thick as thieves
  • plenty of fish in the sea
  • think outside the box
  • like a kid in a candy store
The phrases above are only a very few of the many, many cliches we use on a daily basis. They do bring a clear image to us, but in writing, we should shun them. For a quick exercise, think of a better, less well-known way to phrase the seven listed above.

When I was a newbie writer, I was the Queen of Cliches. I didn't realize until other writers who critiqued my work marked them that I tended to speak in cliches. It stood to reason that I transferred those oral thoughts into my writing. Every story or essay I subbed to my writing group came back with one or more cliches marked. They began to feel like someone was pinching me, telling me to stop doing this. I worked at the problem and am much better today. I learned that coming up with a better phrase helped me be creative, and it also made me think about eliminating those easy cliches instead of blithely using them. Am I perfect now? Not by a longshot! Ooops, there's another one. 

Cliches stand out to an editor who reads your work. One might get a pass. Two or more in one piece will probably get a rejection. If you have the habit that I did, work on breaking it. I still slip up sometimes, and I am irritated when it happens because I know better.

Do a search using the keywords 'cliches in writing' to read more about this small but important part of our writing world.



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