Zbraslav Castle
Today, I am going to give you an example of how you can turn a travel article into a personal essay and a bit of bio of a particular person. All that in one piece of writing? Yes. The story below has been published numerous times. The travel part is because we took a trip with a group of friends. It was a personal essay because it tells of a special time for me and all the reasons why that was so. The bio part comes in the telling of bits and pieces of the life of a Baron from Czechoslovakia (now the Czech Republic). I could have written a piece about "My Trip to Prague" or a piece telling what I learned as I traveled to a friend's old home. Or, I could have written a story all about the Baron (which I did another time) By combining all three, I raised the interest level for readers, which is probably why it has been a popular piece.
This is the story and a few more photos.
Dinner in a restaurant in Zbraslav (Ken and me at far left)
Joe’s
Castle
By Nancy Julien Kopp
As soon as the iron gates came into view, the conversation in our rented van ceased. All six of us leaned forward for a better view while we drove slowly onto the park-like grounds of “There it is,” Joe told us. It was Joe’s boyhood home, a home that had been occupied by enemy soldiers during World War II, then taken over by the communists, a home that Joe had fled over fifty years earlier. Joe is the Baron Joseph Barton-Dobenin, the oldest of three sons who were raised in a thirteenth-century castle that sits in all its majesty a few miles outside of We pulled up in front of the colorful castle and scrambled out of the van while Joe spoke to the guard on duty. Our visit here started in jest at one of our Dinner/Bridge sessions. Joe’s wife, Elizabeth, had said, “You know what? We should all go over to We’d heard a great deal about the castle ever since it had been returned to Joe’s family when the communist government fell during The Velvet Revolution. Now, we were to see it. What had been mere words would soon be mental pictures to file in our memories and see again and again once home in When the communists seized the castle a few years after World War II, they turned it into a museum. Consequently, everything in it was left exactly as it had been, and the entire building was well maintained. People flocked to tour the castle, to exclaim over the masters’ paintings, the porcelain, the sculptures and antiques throughout. Today, one end is a national art gallery. Joe’s niece and her children occupy the lower floor of the remainder of the castle, and Joe has kept the upper floor private. It continues to be furnished exactly as it was in his childhood. His mother’s portrait still graces a wall in a salon. I gazed at the portrait for a long time. Painted in the years just prior to World War I, the woman looks regal and feminine in a froth of a dress, but her strength of character comes through as well. When Joe was only fifteen, his father died, and his mother became head of the family. Hitler had come to power, and before long, During the war, German officers lived in the castle at Zbraslav with the Barton-Dobenin family. Joe inherited his father’s title, but he and his brothers were sent to work in the fields with other Czechs. Joe tells a wonderful story about the surrender of those same German soldiers. When the end of the war was imminent, two American lieutenants drove a jeep, with a white towel on its antenna, up the castle road. They asked to see the officer in charge, then informed the German they were authorized to take him and his men prisoners. The Germans agreed but asked for time to get ready. While they talked outside in a courtyard, Joes’ mother joined them, carrying a large, oversized book in her hands. “Gentlemen,” she said, “would you sign my guest book?” The two Americans readily agreed, and each man signed his name. One of them wrote that he hoped they might visit again under better circumstances. Later that day, the two Americans in their jeep led several thousand German enlisted men and officers, who camped on the castle ground, on foot to the American lines. Why had it been so easy? The Germans chose to surrender to the Americans rather than to the Russians who were close behind. We wandered from room to room admiring the murals that graced the ceilings and the oriental rugs that rested on the floor. White porcelain stoves in the corner of many of the rooms provided heat on cold winter days. Large windows in every room afforded views of a winding river and dense forest that surrounded the castle and courtyard. I lingered at one such window admiring the view. Long before this, Joe and his little brothers must have done the same. After our wonderful tour of Joes’ castle, we got down to the business we’d come for—playing Bridge. Joe took us to the rooms he’d been given when he turned eighteen. To mark his entry into an adult world, his mother had a lovely bed/sitting room and bath redone for him. The tall windows looked down on a small courtyard and the verdant forest beyond. We toasted our hosts, with a small glass of Becherovka, a local liqueur that slid easily across the tongue. The cards were dealt, and laughter and conversation rang in the castle once more. Another memory had been etched into our lives because of our friend Joe, his warm heart, and his beautiful castle.
Joe pointing out the beautiful ceiling to our friend, Jack
Readers of this story asked for more about Joe's life, so I wrote a piece called "A True Fairy Tale" which was posted here quite a few years ago. If you would like to read more about Joe's life as a Baron, then a refugee, then a professor and once more a Baron, go here.
Joe and his wife, Elizabeth (below) have both passed away but live on in the hearts of many for their kindness and generosity to those in the Czech Republic and at both Kansas State University and the University of Nebraska. |
Amazing place
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