What more do I want, Maxine? A lot.
I want you to write with passion.
I want you to write using sensory details throughout your piece.
I want you to eliminate unnecessary words.
I want you to use active verbs
I want you to use active verbs
I want you to open with a great hook.
I want tension, whether it is fiction, creative nonfiction or a poem. Make me want to keep reading.
I want tight writing that carries the reader along smoothly.
I want writing that evokes emotion in the reader.
I want the reader to feel satisfied at the end of the read.
I want a variety of sentences, long and short.
I want the same tense used throughout--no hopping back and forth.
It's not a lot to ask, Maxine. All these points are what makes a successful writer.
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